Things in my mind appear to real,
I lose all sanity and control,
Mind comes and then unfolds,
My mind goes blank and then gone,
Things that are really there aren't,
I need some place quite and safe,
Some place to finally get away,
I'll go to the cemetery,
Where all is dark and astray,
My mind has finally gone away,
Pain comes back and then no relax,
Screams appear everywhere,
WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE!,
Is this real or is this not,
My hole body begins to burn hot,
I see a shadow drift in front of me,
Something that can't be described about,
Screams come back again,
I THINK I"M GOING TO LOSE MY HEAD!,
There it is again,
That same shadow coming closer,
CLOSER AND CLOSER getting near,
More screams appear in my mind,
I think I just lost my mind,
Breathing rapidly and more heavy,
I can't run away it'll follow,
MAKE IT STOP!!! MAKE IT STOP!!!!
There it is,
My eyes go blank and all I see is black,
Now I can finally relax,
An I dead or am I alive,
All I know is that what I saw is no lie,
My heart beat begins to fade,
My life begins to slip away,
Death has finally found its way.
A contest entry
- the voices... by shecantstopfalling..
360 points, ended October 11, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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you have to win my love! this was great!
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this was a pretty good poem. You made me read some of the words quicker, while when you got to "there it is," I slowed my reading down. When you said "my mind goes blank and all I see is black" I was reminded of absence epilepsy which I used to have. all that happens is you stop thinking and ur mind goes blank and ur senses....stop. anyway...I just thought that was cool. Good luck in the contest and thank you for entering
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