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why should i remain?

and you wake up
with the sun shining between your teeth
and a forgetful thought in the back of your
mind.

he has himself wrapped up in
plastic and a cardboard case that
perfects his
freedom.

she has herself covered in
letters and a marker that
she wrote "it's too late for us now."
and stuck between
the pages of that
empty journal.

they have themselves,
apart and on the edge of a
counter top with nails between their
feet and a hand that grasps the ends
of hair and the bones that are scraping
against the concrete and i am just
here

with myself and my notes and i am
tap, tap, tapping my fingers against the side
of the coffee cup and
praying that you
reappear.

what.

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  • She Stole My Voice
    September 29, 2008

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    -dies of amazingness.-



    ♥ ♥ ♥ x infinity + forever + eternity.


    -Mary


  • hks
    September 29, 2008
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    =]

    awesome


  • acoustical
    September 29, 2008

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    modest mouse?

    this is really...well your last stanza is a good example:
    tap tap tapping


    it's got that flow. you know?


  • Miss Faith
    September 29, 2008

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    how is it possible for one person to be as creative as you?!

    you are amazing my darling!


    "they have themselves,
    apart and on the edge of a
    counter top with nails between their
    feet and a hand that grasps the ends
    of hair and the bones that are scraping
    against the concrete and i am just
    here"


  • twisted prince
    September 29, 2008
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    nice poem is everythng alruight???? S

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