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Angel

To see you I have
to look deep within,
You hide behind
those walls like I'm a sin,

To hear you I have
to listen very well,
You speak so softly
just like an angel,

To feel you I have
to stand very close
You know my heart
and what matters the most

To sense you I have
to pay close attention
You walk so quietly
I forgot to mention

To know you I have
to be very patient
You open up slowly
You don't like to vent

To love you I have
but to open my heart
You take my love now
Not like you did from the start


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"To see you, I have to look deep within" -Sensuity

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  • Sensuity
    September 29, 2008
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    This was beautifully expressed! Good luck in the contest.


  • Candy6
    September 29, 2008
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    Great write!