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Closed Encounters.

 

 

I bumped into Dudley
while getting out of a limo
in New York City,
I was removing an
1865 C.F. Martin guitar,
of mine, in a skeleton key lock 

hand-pegged coffin case,
and was not paying attention
to who was behind me.

He said, 'Ello, excuse me.
and smiled widely,
as I apoligized briefly,
never reaizing who he was.
My girlfriend told me
a few minutes later,
just exactly who I'd
brushed elbows with.

The guitar is gone now,
sold to some
collecter of time,
Dudley is gone too,
time collected him.
They both lie somewhere
in the darkness
of a coffin case.
Icons of the 19th and
20th century,
one covered in dust,
while the other
tragically becomes it.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Artis


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True story.....

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  • Uniquely-Scarred
    October 2, 2008
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    that last line about the dust welldone with that i really liked it best of luck in the contest


  • Frodofan silver member
    September 29, 2008

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    WOW! Very cool experience, very cool how you related and intertwined the two things. I am a rhyme lover, but the way you tell your story kept me interested and impressed. Nicely said!


  • suseann
    September 29, 2008

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    You lucky duck! But I personally think his spirit is moore free than ever. His love of music,laughter and life lives on in our hearts and minds eternal.Liked the true story told though. Don't we wish to be aware more of spectacular events happening around us though. He'd of loved your personality and wit you know?


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    September 29, 2008

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    Superb plus

    A fine write, indeed. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done.