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Little Explorer

A young boy eager to explore the land, the world
lost so tragic you see
he fell into a pond and drowned
my heart now bleeds.

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True story. very young. shouldn't have happened.

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  • fallenAngel86
    September 30, 2008
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    that is so sad, I don't even know how to respond.
    it definitly happens to often,


  • Puppydog gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    SAD AND SO TOUCHING!!

    This is so sad yet happens often, I have one of my own which I did write about in one of my early poems. Young people make mistakes and sometime they last forever.