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Siren Song.

Missing image

The ghost inside the mirror,
views a fairy clad in pink,
enraptured by reflection,
in which this child must sink.

Unsuspecting innocence,
wings of silvered light,
moving ever closer,
unaware of plight.

Closer to the picture,
she moves with sense, beguiled,
to touch it with her fingertips,
naivety of child.

Too late, she drowns in spectral glass,
her life no longer free,
the mirror with its siren song,
now waits for you and me.




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Credit artist:: Secret Visions by manips-of-artist2

Not everything is as it seems.

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  • sheltered
    October 6, 2008
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    masterful rhyme. congrats


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    Love the subtle darkness here, beautifully penned! The rhyme and flow are perfect and the imagery portrayed is superb. A wonderful read! Thanks for entering and good luck


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    Ahhh yes, nothing is as it's seems! Wonderful write which tinges with darkness yet down in a lovely way!!