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Be my Tree

Be my Tree:

I want to lean
against you ...
feeling
your rough
touch
with my smooth
tender
skin

Make your mark
upon my soul
deep
impressions
rooted in moist
soil:

soft
whispers
of Eternity

Let me climb
up to the seventh
Heaven
searching
my way
through
evergreen leaves
to the sweetness
of your
Fruit

be my Tree:

drip
your Myhrr
into my open
wounds

heal
this feeble
heart ...


myra

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Written March 1st, 2002

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  • myrataal silver member
    March 17, 2002
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    Thank you, Mona ... I always enjoy your poems ...


  • mona
    March 17, 2002
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    beautiuly written myra


  • myrataal silver member
    March 2, 2002
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    These words whispered themselves ... I caught them om the breath of the wind ...


  • March 2, 2002
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    :o) i like the imagery here, reads like you're whispering the words, or is that just me awake in this early time.

  • myrataal silver member
    March 1, 2002
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    haikumonk, you are such an inspiration ... Thank you.


  • haikumonk gold member
    March 1, 2002
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    Very, very nice for sure. 'Let me climb up to seventh heaven'...... what a great tree to enjoy!! This is a tight well constructed poem.

  • myrataal silver member
    March 1, 2002
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    Thank you, my Australian friend.


  • gecko
    March 1, 2002
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    tis stunning my south African friend


  • myrataal silver member
    March 1, 2002
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    Gwion, Cinara, Mike: How wonderful to be part of this community; thank you for your sincere words, my dearest Muses ...

  • Michael Dennis Rivers
    March 1, 2002
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    We are all connected, we all help one another, you say it so beautifully Myra.
    Mike

  • Cinara
    March 1, 2002
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    Oh, How lovely. THis is so well written. A superb Write!

  • Gwion
    March 1, 2002
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    This is beautiful...so solid and so grounding.
    I love it! :o)

  • myrataal silver member
    March 1, 2002
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    Thank you T&D ... Welcome at Allpoetry!

  • myrataal silver member
    March 1, 2002
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    You read me, Birchwood ... Thanks

  • TidesAndDreams
    March 1, 2002
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    Simple, but beautiful and well written. Your poem explains how I feel right now.


  • March 1, 2002
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    Ahhhhh yes .. be strong for me ..

    beautiful

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