Sitting down today at my easel
picking up my pencil I draw myself.
Drawing lines defining my boundaries
and limits
using shadow and shading to add to
the depth and detail of the picture
Erasing lines that don't belong
sharpening and refining the ones
that support and give the image meaning.
My image done
jumping off the page
one small problem
How does one draw their soul?
A contest entry
- "This statement is a lie." by PatheticKt.
300 points, ended September 30, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow. this made me think, which is amazing. i love having to ponder what i read. you did an amazing job here.
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Interesting, indeed.
From the theme: IMO, it's like an instance you ask who this person looks like and they answer it quite well but when asking how does their soul look like, there is no clue at all.
So yes, interesting. Love the depiction, all right. Although, I asked for 10 lines but this, I won't mind
Overall, lovely write you got here
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omg this is bloody awesome
idk if u meant to do this but i got the idea of u drawing urself in ur own eyes and how ppl judge u upon first inprestions and that looks can not always show wat ur soul is like
BRAVO
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