hands entwined
we dream over glasses of wine
and bread sticks long staled
hearts content
we listen to music playing on old radios
toast our good fortune and smile in remembrances
life joint
we celebrate another moment passed
the enriched joy and happiness we feel
promise kept
we laugh into each others eyes
everything all there shinning still so bright
A contest entry
- creative & raw by Dienush.
1000 points, ended October 4, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a very sweet poem, though I wish you had done a little farther from the obvious with the prompt. I love the third line - it says so much about how lasting this feeling, this moment is... Thank you for your entry.
~Diana -
oh wow, sigh my special one
this is so love filled and sensual, you painted out such a pretty picture so so well
To me this is worthy of gold
Cind's
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