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Pride Comes

I mean to dislocate your ego
so you fall from pride of place.
You could have let it go
Slunk off without a trace
Such swaggering self importance
Refuses to say no.
These stupid girls will twist and dance
When you choose to say so.
Is it worth your awesome thunder,
To drag us all asunder
Your battleship of arrogance?
Do any of us stand a chance.
At the feet of the triumphant self important motherfucker of the year,
Leaving foolish bowing children in his wake.

Consider this:
You could give a shit instead of take the piss.

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A poem about a male friend of mine.

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  • SatuRn Grotesk
    October 6, 2008

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    I'm am completely speechless. And as this can be taken into a political view as well w/ the whole Obama vs Mcain and Palin...I like this alot.

    I can't believe I missed this

    <3
    ::hugs::

    SatuRn


  • Shimano
    September 29, 2008
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    Your words leave honest mind-prints reminding me of an ex of mine...bad thing she is a girl that has too much of pride and ego,whos lost her self and simplicity of just being a person.

    Your words not just touch my heart but echo my feeling witin

    Thank you