I AM
the
sum
parts
of my present and future life ~
therefore,
I accept responsibility for my decisions.
never
the less,
this is my previous life.
Author notes
Responsibility for our choices and subsequent paths are more complex that one might think.
Invoke thought?
Comments
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cool and in likeness so laied back
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Exceptional
This piece is written with few words but more meaning to it then plenty other poems I have read on the site... So many of us can relate to such a piece.
Well penned
Zia,
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profound
i can entirely relate to this piece at this present state of living i'm living... simple, but realistic and i like the reminders in your words to my present state...
Abbs -
I am. The picture in itself says so much. your words add to the pictures dialogue and create a very poingnant point. We are all indeed responsible for the decisions we make, unless of course, someone makes them for you when you have no choice but to obey. I agree totally with your authors notes. Are peoples choices sometimes paths that they are unable to loosen themselves from? This write of yours can open up many avenues of thought and gets one thinking. Well done.
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Quite a moving work of poetry...well expressed from your point of view. Thanks!!!
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its good when you can recognize your past ,so you can make a difference in your future
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Sometimes that past life tends to cling like ivy vines growing against a brick building. We have to prune and let go. I love how you brought these words full circle. Excellent!
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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I love the simplicity of it, though it takes a while to digest the complex meaning. I found it nice that it seemed that you were just letting out your thoughts, rather than focus on the use of pretty words.
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Really lovely
Sometimes the sum is as "queer as a clockwork orange", cold steel in movement numb to the touch.
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Inspirational
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this is fantastic! deeply moving, it reminds me of a plaque i have hanging on my wall. thank you for sharing this, keep writing poet. God bless you always
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well said
the wheel of karma turns until i get it right
well said ,well penned
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So true
Life takes us where it will, our mind controls where we end up, and it will be because of the choices we have made. Another short but great write. -
Moving !
wow i really understand this piece more than you know that reflections is about all of us, gaining strength and transforming to a greater being,
beautiful
Rend
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Man, I love this. I enjoy philosophical pieces. This is profound without being pretentious. Bravo!
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