In awe; encapsulated my angel does wait
Calling me with harmonious softly spoken words
this mesmerising vortex has beauty beyond comprehension
Forcing me to fail in its description
however I will try; take the most beautiful moment in your life
Now times this by infinity, nay impossible
This winged vision lovingly caresses removing all doubt
one thing I can say that you might relate
The comfort akin to a big feather bed
offering the warmth and security for weary travellers
Fear not she awaits us all, for she is a true angel
In every meaning of the god given word x
A contest entry
- Angels in our midst by poetryality.
500 points, ended September 30, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a wonderfully beautiful write, gentle, with rich vivid language, really romantic, makes me want to eat chocolates in a heart shaped box.Thanks for sharing
littlefiswhone
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Very nicely penned
Wonderful use of language within this poem
nay impossible..
mesmerizing vortex
Best wishes in the contest
Julie
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I love the line;
"one thing I can say that you might relate
The comfort akin to a big feather bed"
I love the feel of a 'bed and breakfast' that I once happened upon, where the owners were like angels and the food was as glorious.
I like the sentiments here and yes we "fail" in appropriate "descriptions" for angels.
Thank you for this solid entry and I wish you well in the challenge.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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