Darling won’t you take me by the hand
walk together, forever in the sand
you know you were made just for me
in my subtle way, I shall set you free
This could be the love, that you long for
dance upon the sun, open up your door
The majesty of love is poured for you
as you trickle upon my mind with words so true
Honey take my life within your palm
sweet serenity, flows into the calm
you never play a game, you’re so for real
I am but a simple man, I’ll go with what I feel
repeat all, song “Were all the way” Eric Clapton, album slowhand.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Pen me a song ( contest ) by Riftkin.
725 points, ended October 5, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Love the line The majesty of love is poured for you
as you trickle upon my mind with words so strue.
A very well written blues feel to it.
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Penned the lyrics that of warmth, of love, of friends who are cared for..
Beautiful
Best wishes in the contest
Julie x
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I love this one, for it speaks soft and wonderful to me. A simple life with another that cares, is what this world needs.
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Given in one moment, and to see to all your needs.
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