Dare you walk into my killing zone
Unaware of I, the liar in wait
And of the atrocities I am prone
As you lie bare and prostrate
Do you not know the true monster inside
The depraved creature who devours lust
Of the deciet and gluttony I well hide
That would molest your naïve trust
My dull gaze belays the viciousness behind my eyes
Yet they pierce deep, seeking faint frailties
Exposed, I assualt your armor with a battery of lies
Relentlessly, till i've breached your sanctity
None the less, in malice I quell the beast
None the less, it snarls in contemptous disdain
And I feel it conspire and wish me deceased
As it unleashes grieved wrath, bitter and bane
I bow my head that my eyes may not be seen
To never reveal the hell scortched soul within
Longing for lakes of fire so caustic, so serene
Yet ever ravenous to bathe in the gore of sin
I silence my tongue and speak no words
That I may not salivate from my open lips
As I dream to feast like carrion birds
Upon your sweet flesh in my clawed grips
In chains of shadow I bind all that is me
Do not seek me, speak not nor think my name
Flee now, lest you fall to my tyranny
For it is not your heart I wish to tame
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Dare you walk into my killing zone
YES!
you have some of the greatest lines
oh & LoL
I just realised you're 15
Way Good
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15 ?
Gods of hell I wish I could erase half of my existance and somehow try to do it over again with the insight of the last 15 years of existing.
But I am 31, where does it say in 15?
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LOL sorry
Yes I am a dumbass
I was reading
15 old applause
Ha!
You can laugh at me if you want
I always do
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Ok This is my new favorite! I love poems like this wow!!!!! I think this is really freaking awesome. I am kinda geeking out right now lol
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holy @#$%!
Wow. I think I am vivaciously in love with your words. I would mention my favorite lines or something of the sort but I honestly couldn't choose. Your write is consistently amazing. The words you use are so powerful and thought provoking and provide so much imagery ... and the rhyme scheme works perfectly. Great write!!!
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Thanks for the read, andencouraging comment
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I probably enjoy your writing so much because you give words to similar feelings of mine... the curse of empathy
this is probably ONE of my most favs. as it awakens a sometimes slumbering stubborn side of me that wants to shove back.
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Sucks when you bury yourself forthe good of others who never even know...butthat is the beauty of sacrifice
(i'd make a good christan)
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or a good followerer in the glendinian cult
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SUPER!
wow..you are well talented my friend with your writing! it is amazing and full of such words that hit you on the spot. i got to say, such profound piece of work.EXCELLENT!!!
Juliet
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Thanks
A funny thing to do with this piece, I don't know if you get the total meaning of it, but it kind of talks about the kind of person who influences the kind of person I wrote about in the poem that is posted next after this one "Asinine Destiny".
It almost appears hypocritical if looked at in a mistaken way.
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I think this is the best poem you've put up here and my favorite so far. The first three stanza's are fantastic, the imagery is captivating from the first line. "Dare you to walk into my killing zone"... it's one of those lines that I wish I'd written.
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This is the kind of poetry that i feel like reading more then once. I think your work is one of the best i've read in here. Keep it up !
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Thanks.
This is one of the few favorites of mine that i've wrote as well.
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Your last stanza is brilliant...well done.
~E.
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