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Senses Deep Within.

Missing image
Whispers only souls can hear,
reflections in the mind,
touching senses deep within,
illusions for the blind.

Delusion paints abstraction,
only few can hear,
voices from a nether world,
jagged edged, unclear.

Sane men point a finger,
at minds they cannot see,
praising selfish sanity,
normalities debris.

Do not question lives,
you do not understand,
where voices wander lonely,
in dementias lost land.




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  • shecantstopfalling.
    October 11, 2008
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    this is a beautiful write! brilliant! good luck and thanx for entering!


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    September 29, 2008

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    WOW this is a beautiful piece! I love the way you took the picture and formed a whole new one with your words, simply wonderful xx