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A Warning

One after another,
They climb, they tumble-
And I knock them down, time and again
-Does an apology even count anymore?-
They're automatic, my actions-
A welcome, short-lived
Disappointment
Avoidance
Guilt, but too late...

Don't even bother.

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Any help with spacing, structure, etc is appreciated.

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  • Felixthecat7
    October 16, 2008
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    Nice short but kwl


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    Ohhh, I can certainly help with the "spacing" part, as you well know.