Everyday, im lonely
What should i do about it?
Tell someone, when i dont have any friends,
Or should i tell someone who understands,
But doesnt want to listen to what i say?
What should i do?
Today, im lonely.
What will tomorrow be?
A contest entry
- No One Cares by perfectdarkangel.
525 points, ended October 11, 2008, 12 entries
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lovely
i like it well done x
its well written -
This is a sad piece of writing, especially about not having any friends or anyone to listen. You just have to keep that hope that tomorrow will be better, and eventually it will be.
Thanks for entering and best of luck.
Forever--x
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thanks you. i shall take your advice on board
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in the fourth line you should probably make it into two lines, but other than that you did a really good job. thanks for penning this.
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Awww sweet i love it
good write -
The part about people who understand but don't want to listen is interesting. Sometimes people just don't have time to listen. Everyone is so busy now. Please don't think I am making excuses for these people but catch them at another time maybe? It's hard sometimes not to be lonely! I have certain times of day, these days, when I sink into it, if I'm not careful. But it does go away. Comes back, goes away, etc.
I hope tomorrow won't be so lonely.
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A lovely poem, of a loner
no matter whether it is long or short.........but it comes directly from heart.
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but i like short poems and i will keep penning
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this is really sad.
i suggest you write a longer poem. u would be good at that. keep penning my friend. 
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