So I’ll stitch my mouth shut
[with our stolen kisses xx]
Because everyone saw the rosette-bruises on my delicate neck
& the tell-tale scratches down your taut back.
But [.]no.one[.] saw the chaos between us;;
As our eyes met
And we both knew…
So shhh! [baybee ♥]
Your pretty girlfriend is a princess,,
But I’m a doped-up dollface
With madness on my mind,
Original sin on my lips
& the devil in my eyes.
So pass me your cigarette
To pass the time
While we talk about
School, sex && Sublime
And how we can[’t] be together
Without a bottle of wine.
I miss you, baybee
Please come home –-x
I want another chapter in our
[cigarettesmoke.and.whiskeysoaked]
fairytale.
Author notes
Written 29.9.08
[♥♥]
CatSlash
7. Write about star-crossed lovers.
A contest entry
- Finding Love [True Love Waits Forever][Awaiting Arrival Of Unborn Child] by stargazer..
400 points, ended April 20, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i love this poem! amazing write
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Wow. There were so many amazing phrases in this poem- "doped-up dollface with madness on my mind, original sin on my lips & the devil in my eyes" was definitely my favorite, but "another chapter in our [cigarettesmoke.and.whiskeysoaked] fairytale" was also brilliant.
The punctuation used worked really well with the poem. I just wish you chose a different background, since this one makes the text hard to read without highlighting (a pet peeve of mine). Other than that, awesome job. Thanks for the amazing read. -
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Thanks for the comment =] I know the background is difficult, but I just couldn't resist... It's too pretty! Plus, it matched the mood of the write, I thought.
Thankie xx Cat
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