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Oblivion

Down,
slipping gently
down

Floating nearly
but the subtle slope
is so slippery
it's hard
not to dive head-first
into that sweet oblivion

So light, airy
it isn't cold
but
it isnt warm either
it simply
is
and that is good enough
for me

Am I good enough
for you

Oblivion
wont love me
but
it wouldn't hate me
either
It would never call me
wrong
stupid
ugly
Did I say that?

I deserve
Oblivion
deserves me

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  • outthereWaterford
    September 29, 2008
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    its so easy to slip over the edge and realize that where it all went and weep