The golden eyes of a lusted lover,
Bridge the gap to one another.
A key shaped hole that long held a place,
Awaiting a mass with purpose and grace.
The longing and hoping for a lover's kiss,
Leading the crusade for eternal bliss.
Needing to feel a small piercing bite,
That gives life away to forever's night.
Author notes
thinking about the best romance since romeo and juliet.
A contest entry
- Twilight & Tears by Asylaarix.
1750 points, ended October 15, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
not sure if im finished with this. For any of you twilight lovers out there, anything i can do to make this better?
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This is beautiful!!
I love it.
It made mehh smile xD
x[[♥]]x
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amazing
Awaiting a mass with purpose and grace.
The longing and hoping for a lover's kiss,
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its very beautiful but your right it doesn't seem finished.try rewriteing it again sometimes that helps me.
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