Young eyes that stare at me
A dress thats almost seductive
Matched with a fashionable hat
Long golden curls
Teasing me
Enticing me
But she's only 16
So young and unaware
Of her seductive manner
Of her eye catching looks
Innocent at least for now
Author notes
I chose picture one and wrote it from the perspective of an older male photographing her...
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Comments
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Ahh very good take on the picture.
Wonderful and honest thoughts,
lovely imagery as well.
Thanks for sharing & best of luck
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Nice idea, I'm struck often by the innocence of the young girls and think back on myself at the age of 16.. I thought I was so grown, teetering on the edge between girlhood and womanhood, learning the power of flirtation, this captures that feeling beautifully.
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wow another great poem by my favorite Meej
this girl is really great
she can write as cute poems as she is
and i believe Meej will be one of the great poet soon enough
because Meej is great
take care mate
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