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So far

A secret visit
Or at least it seemed like such
For we were so far

Far from our loved ones
Away from people who cared
Our business was our's

My focus was you
Romantic independence
Sweet and complete love

Utterly alone
In the middle of nowhere
Yet the world was our's

A true vacation
To remind us of what's real
What life is about..

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  • Amergin
    September 29, 2008

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    Nice, it has a good and steady flow to it. Love the background and what this poem is referring to.