I gaze through my bedroom window
Looking for my true love match
Dreaming
Gazeing
Hoping
Wishing
For that knight in shining armor to appear.
I stare through this window day in and day out.
That he how holds the key to my heat shall appear.
The one who will be the one who always means I love you.
This window seems to be like my dairy.
Because in its glass holds all my secrets and desires.
Because as look through this window for my true love,
I also look out into the world
Out into my future
I sit and pretend
That beyond this glass
I am the the princess in every childhood story
Because I know in those stories
They always get there prince charming
So I want to be just like them.
So as a shut the curtain at the end of the night
I leave a small note
To tell my prince
Im still waiting.
Author notes
I wana be your AP twin. I pick option number 6.
A contest entry
- Wanted: More AP family members by Iridessa MoonFlower.
600 points, ended October 14, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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good
I though t i was going to be that person! ~lol~ -
This was really great! I really liked this. I enjoyed the fact that it reminds me of a real life fairy tale. Good luck in the contest. I would like it for you to be my AP twin. ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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Nicely Written !
I really like the way that you have decribed the fact that you are , still there waiting for your prince charming , that is so sweet ! Maybe it is all about fairy tails , but it is always nice to know what it is like to get your wish , In The End Of The Story !!!!!!! Blessings be To You Always !!!!!!! Brenda Gae P. S. And you do have time to edit your poem and correct or change anything you want to ! Good luck in the Contest !
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very good
A nice poem, well written, a few spelling errors, line 4 gazing, line 9 heart, line 22 I.But the content is still very good
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