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Final Goodbye

Putting it away now,
Trying not to cry.
I heard you got a new girl,
I guess we've really said goodbye.

But when it's over, then it's over,
And moving on is the best thing to do.
I think I've done it, it's still just kind of sad,
Because we all know it's hard to forget you...


you made me smile again,
picked me up when i fell,
so thanks for all you've done, love-
i can only wish you well....

Author notes

So...I finally took her necklace off. I finally did it! I'm actually kind of proud...but it's still kindda sad, y'know?

Goodbye's the saddest word I'll ever hear.

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  • Bohemianwriter
    October 1, 2008

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    GREEEEEEEEEEEEEEAT ESPECIALLY THE LAST PART...

    you made me smile again,
    picked me up when i fell,
    so thanks for all you've done, love-
    i can only wish you well....


    LOVE ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT


  • Sir Squigglim
    September 29, 2008
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    Aw, glad to know you were able to do it!!!!!!


    we're all proud


  • Zeek17
    September 29, 2008
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    ! hope this is the best next step u've taken!
    I liked the poem to .


  • KyleBerg gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    congrats on taking that step towards moving on
    I hope you'll be alright
    lovely poem too