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I'm coming...

Waiting and broken,
sheer loneliness,
I cry for you,
My love...

You've left me,
Without your presence,
Not your fault,
I know...

War calls,
And you went,
But you didn't
Come back...

Sometimes I feel you,
Around me,
I feel you watching,
surrounding me...

So I weep,
For my lost love,
My soulmate,
Partner in life...

How do I go on?
How do I survive?
Without you,
In my life...

Until death do us part,
I can't do this,
Please understand,
Why I am coming to you...

I took the whole bottle-
Of pills they gave me,
To sedate me,
To be with you...

I feel you,
I love you,
I need you,
I'm coming...

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Painting # 4: "Forever A Mystery"

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    Beautiful write filled with many
    emotions and depth.
    Good imagery displayed as well.

    Thanks for sharing & best of luck