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Welcome Home Darling!

 

 

In a crowded room

I see your beautiful smile

shining through the misty haze

the smoke from a stranger's cigar

and the endless movement all around

 

you sit there with a glass

cold champagne on the rocks

talking to the bartender

as he mixes up another drink

the crowd is restless around you

 

I stand against a pillar

watching your emerald eyes

you search intently around the room

hoping to find some good conversation

 

you finally look over to my side

our eyes meet for the first time in years

I smile as I move in to say hello

extending my hand to meet yours

 

I slowly bring it up to my face

taking in your wonderful perfume

so sweet and fresh like the summer time

you softly blush as I kiss you tenderly

 

we talk for several minutes

as the band starts to play in the background

I look into your eyes and ask you to dance

again you extend your hand to me

I take it and lead you to the dancefloor

 

with only a few couples dancing

we practically have it all to ourselves

I hold you ever so close to me

your head upon my chest

as you listen to my beating heart

 

I look down upon you as you whisper

softly in my ear, "I love you very much"

I lean over and kiss your little lips and say

"I love you more than you could ever know"

 

I watch as your eyes slowly begin to tear

I pick you up and cradle you next to my heart

then spin you around in my arms

you smile so sweetly at me and touch my face

 

I take a deep breath and sigh

tears begin to cascade down my face 

knowing that after all of these years

I have finally found you

you're finally home again

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • xSarahx
    September 30, 2008

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    Aww, this is so sweet. It reminded me of an old classic movie, the bar scene, the dancing, and the -real- love, where the guy can show emotion too! Great job!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    September 29, 2008
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    How beautifully romantic and sweet. Such a precious story told in descriptive prose... x


  • hotchocolate gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    This is so romantic a great read this was!! Good Luck in the contest

    I watch as your eyes slowly begin to tear
    I pick you up and cradle you next to my heart
    then spin you around in my arms
    you smile so sweetly at me and touch my face


  • Asylaarix
    September 28, 2008

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    This is so absolutely precious!
    I loved this hunny
    So romantic
    So beautiful
    It's stunning

    Love Ya
    TT


  • moon2u
    September 28, 2008

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    Love it love it love it
    very romantic
    I have written a couple of poems exactly about the same thing
    the subject, always enchants me


  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    September 28, 2008
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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

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