Time halts its passing
Light and darkness intertwine-
In the twilight zone
Author notes
# 11 prompt
In a list
A contest entry
- TWILIGHT!!! by Missa.
525 points, ended October 15, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - #160 Prompts Contest by daviscth.
525 points, ended November 24, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - It's All In The Title by Aki-Komoriuta.
1050 points, ended October 10, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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i really like the imagery in this Haiku. You did a great job. Thanks so much for sharing in my contest.
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well, it was supposed to be for the books. thats what the contest is about.
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Second contest I've misread
this week =/, uummm..its for the show then =P -
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well i'll keep it. i'm just not going to guarantee a trophy. but its a great poem, just not exactly what i'm looking for
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did you write this for Twilight (book) or Twilight Zone (show)? Cause it seems like the show. but idk. i'll keep it.
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Nope not for book or show
Look at this link, http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/twilight%20zone
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Hauntingly obscured ...
and textured. I loved the possibilities of meaning.
Well done!

Myra

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