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The Twilight Zone

Time halts its passing
Light and darkness intertwine-
In the twilight zone

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  • daviscth silver member
    November 16, 2008

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    i really like the imagery in this Haiku. You did a great job. Thanks so much for sharing in my contest.


  • Missa
    September 29, 2008
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    well, it was supposed to be for the books. thats what the contest is about.


    • SilverQ
      September 29, 2008
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      Second contest I've misread

      this week =/, uummm..its for the show then =P

      • Missa
        September 29, 2008
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        well i'll keep it. i'm just not going to guarantee a trophy. but its a great poem, just not exactly what i'm looking for

  • Missa
    September 29, 2008

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    did you write this for Twilight (book) or Twilight Zone (show)? Cause it seems like the show. but idk. i'll keep it.


  • myrataal silver member
    September 29, 2008

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    Hauntingly obscured ...

    and textured. I loved the possibilities of meaning.

    Well done!


    Myra

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