Life has many things
Which will try to pull us down
Swallow us whole
Not letting us go
But i have to say
I love my life
My life with you in it
Is just divine
Once when a friend
Asked what i loved most about life
I turned them with a look of happiness in my eyes
And said
The person i am with right now
With that person
I feel like nothing
Even life
Can hold me down
I feel free
Free to be loved
.....
Yes my favorite thing in life
Is you
.....
Author notes
2. "Someone asked me what I loved most about life. I smiled and replied, 'The person that I'm with right now.'" --Source Unknown
A contest entry
- Lovingly Quoted by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended September 29, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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A sweet write this is!
Precious wording and thoughts here; thank you so much for sharing! -
Cute!
Really sweet,, makes me want to experience it aye
great writing
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Awww great work! Great take of the prompt. Awsome stuff. Keep it up.
Dani.
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