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and he says, "it's love...radiating."

love

 

Burning bright in hands of deliverance,

she can only imagine how it sounds.

"Hark!" says the hummingbird, whose song is dark

and hates the land.

 

but, wait...I see something in the distance...

 

Slowly, arriving upon the hills,

I see it coming here. It is here.

Love has come to dwell amongst this land.

 

So be renewed in a sweeter voice, 'O bird of song.

Let the nectar give you a joyous melody.

 

And love is radiating,

like I've never seen.

 

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Pic Credit: http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll272/Temptress41/Love/love-2-1.jpg

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  • Heroesrox
    December 30, 2008

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    Awesome job. Keep up the great work and keep writing great pieces like this one!!! You have enough talent for probably all of us here at Allpoetry! Truly a great write. Such an astoudning and amazing job. If you feel like it, check out my poems and feel free to comment them! Be honest, please! Thanks so much for sharing this piece with all of us here at Allpoetry!
    Oh, I just started a new contest! Please take a second to view it and try your hand at it if you wish!

    Here is the link to my new contest! http://allpoetry.com/contest/2431805

    Thanks so much! Have an awesome day!

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  • vampedvixen
    November 13, 2008

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    Sometimes when the world gets so dark, we are taken by complete surprise when the light starts shining again and love starts radiating across the land. It is always darkest before the dawn, and you capture this message so wonderfully in this poem. It gives hope to all those who are going through rough times, such as myself, when someone points out this fact and makes us remember that it can't rain all the time. Thank you for sharing your strength, courage and hope with all of us

  • michaeline
    November 9, 2008

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    I can easily see why you were the honorablr winner.The thoughts that you envoke from this picture prompt is great.You are truely a gifted writer and I like what you had to say.My favorite line would have to be the last two.I would not revise this poem as I think it is perfect just the way it is.Great job and congrats on the honorable win it was well deserved.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 12, 2008

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    You did an outstanding job with this prompt. wow this is absolutely beautiful. I really love this entire poem especially the last two lines..

    good luck

    kat


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 11, 2008

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    I like the beauty of the last stanaza.. a creative poetry is there bringing the truth of the life in the words of wonderful and great poetry..thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece...


  • maralisa silver member
    October 6, 2008
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    a beautiful poem if only this was possible good luck in the contest


  • Netherspice
    October 4, 2008

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    Excellent!

    Suggestive tone, at least as I interpret the rather simple message. Straightforward depth. Wonderful.

    Really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 2, 2008

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    Aww.. wouldn't it be lovely to see that throughout the land!! Lovely write for that lovely pic!


  • movedon
    October 2, 2008

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    Love truly is radiating. Amazing work bro.

    ing alone,
    Mylee


  • trekkergirl
    September 29, 2008
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    hummmm okay guess I'll have to wait for this one.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 29, 2008
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    http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr342/Thegioihinh_photo/love2.jpg

    here is the link for your prompt. please let me know if this works for you. if it doesn't I will find you another prompt.

    kat

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