Still lightly bound
caught within the nights unbridled satin ties
stirring from passions sleep
mornings amber fingers caress flowing slender lines
softness curves in majestic arch
shimmering in muted tones of burnished gold
tender murmurs snatch sleepy breath
as her graceful beauty once again unfolds
a frisson of white heat sears racing heart
as wisps of burnt nutmeg frames freckled perfection
gentle lingering whispers of pleasure
feather gasps of deep affection
sighing with blissful contentment
her body deliciously poised
within the soft glow of a new day
she welcomes loves eternal joy
Author notes
The above painting is by the incomparable Paul John Ballard.
Beauty of the Female.
A contest entry
- Adults Only by special request. . . by j i n.
300 points, ended October 1, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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BEAUTIFUL
This was beautiful. Again, the imagery really stands out in this piece. Your imagery in your writing has really come on in leaps and bounds. This was sensual, deep, loving and your control of the English Language is superb. Wonderful beautiful writing from a very gifted writer indeed.
Darkest Love
Wayne Leon
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Thank you baby, for your wonderful comment, they are always a pleasure. You never cease to encourage me. I appreciate you to the max.
Darkest Love Always
Chelle xxx
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this was a very great smooth read here sug i think you did a very great job with this piece here hon good luck in the contest
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Thank you hon
As always it is a pleasure to have you read
♥ ~sugar~
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a frisson of white heat sears racing heart
as wisps of burnt nutmeg frames freckled perfection
gentle lingering whispers of pleasure
feather gasps of deep affection
sighing with blissful contentment
her body deliciously poised
Very very nice. You've captured the awe, wonderment. I think this is beautiful, thank you for entering, and best wishes
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Pretty
Very well-done sis. One of your best love poems yet. A lot of sensuality in this one. Good one.
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Your best!
The word choice in this is of the highest sensual caliber.
Ya did good, Michelle! 
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Thank you hon...I'm trying
always value and appreciate your comments
Love ~sweetness~ xxx
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Aw hun this is truly beautiful as it is sensual
Delicate within the image shown, your words flow.
Best wishes to you always
Julie
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Thank you Julie
Always a pleasure to have you read
~sugar~
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I love the way you write it is always a joy to read! Good Luck !!!
softness curves in majestic arch
shimmering in muted tones of burnished gold
tender murmurs snatch sleepy breath
as her graceful beauty once again unfolds
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Thank you for your fab comment and the add
valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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