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You never know

Everyone feels
hate
love
delight
Everyone knows
fears
tears
sighs
eveyday tell the ones you love
how you feel
you never know
it could be the last good-bye

Please tell me what you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • heygoo
    October 7, 2008
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    I do like the change..

  • heygoo
    October 2, 2008

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    This is touching and so true. Not complaining but it seems to me to be two separate thoughts. I think the first 6 lines could be developed into something more and the same is true for the finial 3 lines. Compelling insights nonetheless.


    • voicekp
      October 5, 2008
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      You are right i was in two mind sets when i wote it. i will try to revise it . Thanks