With all your grace and beauty, I summon you from the skies
To help me with my duty, please waken and arise
Our world now faces atrocities, the doings of evil kings
With thee I band allegiance, so spread your mighty wings
Carry us to cities far, to rid injustice from those who hate
Wiping out cruel practices, and quelling the irate
With purity you come to me, representing all that’s fair
We go attack the enemy, while he is resting in his lair
Riding to set the people free, “across the sands of time”
From here to the most outer rim, we clip the wings of crime
Author notes
Artwork by Pat Brennan
A contest entry
- Fantasy Picture Inspired Contest IV by ShelleyA.
1000 points, ended September 30, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very Nice
A well worthy poem for the GOLD congratulations my friend!
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Very good title and interpretation of the picture prompt. A very good story poem. Skillfully crafted rhyming couplets. Lovely depth of feeling. Good flow, rhyme and tone. Nice metaphor. Good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. Thank you for your entry.
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I wanna ride!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mylee
PS lovely job -
great as always Boog it has a nice flow and goes so well with the picture! Good luck
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Awesome write !
Brilliant take on the pic
Your rhyme and rythm is fantastic. Best of luck to you with this one 
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