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Cacthimess

Cotton Candy
And moisture
Combined.

A contest entry

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  • Kookaburra
    October 2, 2008
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    We call this Fairy Floss where I live.
    Your word sounds messy and I know why.
    Kook! Kook!


  • Upon Deaths Meeting
    September 30, 2008

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    This is kind of weird. I like weird, though, so it's good. I think that maybe this poem will make people look up ideas for weird poems, maybe even turn them weird and make them think a bit. I hope it does, so they can all be like me! haha

    I think you are a truly talented author and I will continue reading your stuff as I will read more in just a bit, Cre8tiv.

  • mcfreeman
    September 30, 2008
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    Well that changes everything.....


  • sense surreal gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    I can't help it but this really made me smile. first the the title is catchy enough for me to click it and whoa I have never thought of cotton candy...Yum


  • Skybow silver member
    September 29, 2008

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    This Kookaburra brought a giggle. Good title and who doesn't remember the fun of cotton candy. Brings to mind a fair or circus, childish fun. Best of luck in the contest.

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