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Paid for Sin (working title)

You tore me apart
You gave me the reason
You told me you loved me
And bitch I got what I deserved

It sounded like this
It looked like you
It felt like hell
Came down to me

Everything I ever wanted
You promised me you'd lie
I carried out your sentence
Tell me why why why

I came down to this
You bitch
This game it's under my skin
Within you bitch it came down to this

I dug myself this hole of shit
I'll take what I can get
Finished with respecting you
I'm finally done with this

I guess I'm your effigy to be blamed for this
To be put in flames
To kiss the hand that has punished me
Tell me did I get what you deserved

It came down to this
You bitch
This game it's under my skin
Within you bitch it came down to this


Author notes

I chose option 1
The song itself is about a friend who when his girlfriend of a year gave birth to thier son and claimed he raped her.

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  • Topaze
    September 29, 2008

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    Wow! these words speak for themselves, my credit means nothing. Once again I wish to express that if you can turn a blind eye to this, you better prey I'm not standing behind you! Thank you for your honest entry, my best wishes always.