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Words are like leafs

Where do all the words go when no one hears

You were talking loud and everything you said was clear

But everything you said just went right through me

To float away into the sky or maybe just drown in the sea

Either way words are just like leafs

Not much regard for gravity

You talk to talk, you can't get enough

I would much rather just take a walk

You talked a lot about how you'd stay

But our words are like leafs they all just blow away

I guess it doesn't matter because I'm moving on

Your words are the leafs I'm walking on

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  • MusicLuhv
    January 17, 2009
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    Nice story dude. it was good.


  • ShaantSteele
    September 28, 2008

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    that was a really interesting comparison, i didn't think i would like it at first but as it turns out its really good