absently annihilate an ambition;
beaten broken, bruises beneath barely
coherent. Cold
criminal crushing christian crosses,
chunter child
daring death, drawing demons
eager evil educing eerie
fear, fall far forward.
Gisarme gotten
gluttonous gladiator glorified
gracefully gradate
hateful harm, holy halos.
Innocent ignorance
justifying jealousy. Just
killing kids keenly, keeping
lies laughing loudly.
Making mistakes, misheard mutters
never near nostalgic necropolis.
Offensive otherworld opening oubliette
planning painful plights.
Quiver, quake qualmishly
raping revenge reservoirs
sorry sadistic sir.
Tied, tried, tired
untimely unified, under unrecognizable
vile, villainous ventures.
Wellborn weakling werewolf warning
xenogeneic Xnty.
Yearning youth yammering, yanking
zippers zealously.
Author notes
well
dun dun dun dun!!!!
Aliteration!!
A contest entry
- Alphabetical Alliteration by Ja Vorbesc.
450 points, ended September 29, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Yay! Very nicely done. I especially like lines j-l.
Best of luck
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Smiling at how well you wrote this and the theme you chose.
A dramatic poem that meets the challenge of alliteration in fine shape. 
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wow, this is so intresting, well done, i dont think i could do this.lol. but you did it very well, good luck and take care *hugs*
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alliteration is hard when you have to use every letter of the alphabet -
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hahaha, yeah, its amazin you could do it
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