the lazy breaking dawn
of this shuttered and silent
room
would break the best of us
somebody's arm draped across the
small
of your back
their steady breathing
and warmth infiltrating your common sense
the slivers of light fall
flatteringly onto
the nape of his neck
and across his chest, rising and falling,
rising
and falling
your own heart
beats and beats and something happens
something big
some internal,
chemical,
long lasting,
attraction
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very nice.
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Wow :)
their steady breathing
and warmth infiltrating your common sense
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great imagery, really paints a picture for the reader
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