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The Pieces Left Over

Dampness.
The roughness of falling.
Color unreal - nonexistent.
Broken, pain influenced..
Torn apart.

A contest entry

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    I haven't seen a darker take on this prompt than this 13 words, well written. Best to you in the contest


  • xXcrimsontearsXx
    September 28, 2008
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    jaded teardrop

    I liked this, it was short, sweet and to the point...

  • x26ss
    September 28, 2008
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    cool