Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Missing the Second Verse

If my boy were ever given back to me
What would I do?
Give him peanut butter and sick-sweet whisky?
Sink my teeth into his throat because
He dared to ever disappear?
It isn't fair in the grand scheme of things like 'fairness'
I swear that it's not
My stolen cookie from the ash jar
(fucking thief, share with me)

It is very vague of me to assume anything,
But one thing I do wonder is:

Does he even realize he's missing?

I can't say, I can't say and
He's not talking

Author notes

This doesn't really feel 'done' to me, but it's good enough for posting here I guess.

On the off-chance any of you happen to remember me and want to read my fiction, I'm at LiveJournal. Link to my writing journal: http://demon-deception.livejournal.com/. Just be aware that the works in this journal are slash (m/m sex and such) so stay away if you're rampantly homophobic.

Also, 'Verse' in the title has nada to do with the actual poem.

Heh. I've very nearly forgotten how to do this. Hurrah?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Nyx Iscariot
    October 7, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    ...the last line...i can't say...i can't...

    maybe...
    i can't say, i just cant...
    and he's not talking

    (mmmelipses) mugh i missed you. and what you have to say. you've nearly? i have...we can walk that busted ass dirt road together. love you.


  • jantastic
    October 3, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    stalk

    of course we remember you and yeah, what suzi said



  • Suzanne Dia
    October 1, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This one sinks into my heart like teeth.
    I know this emotion, more than I would like to admit.

    I miss you.

  • Emcchesney
    September 28, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    this was very different. It was scary in the thought of very dark and in the underworld. For whatever reason, this was poetry in every sense of the word. great job and I look forward to more of your poetry.