I find myself from time to time
Wishing for the breeze
And then the coldness sweeps me in
And brings me to my knees
I fly on warmest summer air
The words they are my wings
They wrap me in thier current, fair
And set my heart at ease
Yet then the darkness settles in
I crumple to the ground
I shiver as I whither there
And crumble without sound
My voice it has been silenced
By the most bitter cold
I long to spread my wings again
But words cannot be told
And then the bitter frost, it seems
Creeps from the frozen ground
My wings they thaw and flow again
Through sweetest summer sound
The words they are my freedom true
They soar the greatest hights
My wings of words they hold me now
And fly me through the night
Author notes
My words are my freedom...
A contest entry
- DESCRIBE YOURSELF IN Rhyme (spiritual poem) by Pisces rainbow.
1000 points, ended October 7, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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Wow, this is perfect in describing my own muse. A beautifully written poem! Thanks so much for the entry and the help!
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sorry im so late in commenting. Good write ! ! ! ! ! thanks for entering my contest ! ! ! ! ! Keep writing ! ! ! ! ! GOOD LUCK!!
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WHAT A LOVELY FLOW
THIS READS SO BEAUTIFULLY
FREEDOM,
MY WINGS THEY THAW AND FLOW AGAIN
THROUGH SWEETEST SUMMER SOUND
ABSOLUTELY LOVELY
THANK YOU FOR YOUR ENTRY
GOD BLESS...



