Take me not from the flying wilderness
Where the call of the bluebird is heard aloud
And where I am revived by the cool wind's kiss
Deep blue forever, a single cloud.
Such wild beauty, blossoming free
This, yes this, is the life for me!
Where the soaring breeze blows strong
I know at last where I belong:
It is where the winter's dying
Above all the world, a single cloud flying.
Author notes
I wrote this two years ago.
Actually, this was back from when I used to play on neopets. I wrote next: "All you shoyrus and pteri, adrift yet not weary, above the carelessly swirling sky: come to us now, above in the clouds, where you with us may fly. Never stay stuck like poor symols to the ground, but join us here, where wilderness surround!"
Good ol' days when rhyme was my haven... but no one can protect me now.
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Yea, I could sing this.
It's a slow love song. Put a little more with it. A good write.
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yay! i love this one too! i love the flow. lol neopets!! i remember neopets!! oh wow all my guys are probally dead by now...
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Ahhh, neopets.... good times, good times.
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lol yup. im gonna see if i remember my password lol
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wow, awesome. The poem could relate to everything but neopets. hahaha. your rhymes are pretty awesome. simple read. note; i love simple reads. especially ones that paint a picture. very cool!
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