A tunnel of light surrounds me
A peace one only feels when dead
And yet my heart beats louder
The closer that you get
For a soul who wonders lonely
Stumbles when light isn't lit
Yet if you revel in darkness long enough
You'll never miss your step
For joy maybe of sunlight
A harsh unobtainable theme
But stay in your nocturnes Night Angel
Happiness is obtained through dreams
Author notes
This poem is dedicated to my love David , may you never stray into the light.
A contest entry
- Take Me By Moonlight. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended September 29, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give ME EMOTION by Violent Glass.
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very good depiction of an after-death experience....
I love reading spiritual pieces like this. This is a beautiful dedication for David.
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This----
Honestly I just Love--Fantastic!!!! So insiteful for such a young woman----Im taken by this--Can't stop reading it
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Thank you for your most beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Beautiful Sentiments, Poet!!!
Dreams is a great poem!!! 
I think the imagery is nice, although your chosen background, and the color of the text, tend to clash together - at least they clashed for me. The teal blue-green & red color combo reminds me of Christmas. Anyway, the last line is fabulous!!! Best of luck in the contest!!!
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Joy does seem unobtainable sometimes I agree, but thankfully we do have the twilight, we do have a subconscious that can guide us slowly through the darkness of our waking hours. I enjoyed this very much. It was very relatable...even magical.
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