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Walking In The Rain

In order to hide my tears
I walk alone in the rain
The two fluids mix and become one
Oh how I wish to bury the past...
So that my fears will finally disappear.
I have become weak
I am trapped in the past,
The nightmares hunt me
The memories that I want to forget
Just follow me everywhere.
Walking in the rain
Mixing my fears with the shadows,
Hiding my tears in the countless drops of water,
I want the rain to clean my sins
I want to be purified.
I walk in the rain to clean my eyes
yet I don't one anyone to testify
Clean water from the sky
Como fall and liberate my soul from the past...
Purify me with your transparency
and help my soul become clean...
I walk in the rain hoping the past will slowly melt
I walk alone in the night hoping to be rid of my painful past...

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6-Walking In The Rain

A contest entry

This is me...this is what I am, what I have become...

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Comments


  • FreedomPeaceTree
    September 28, 2008
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    my first impresiion is of a person who was abused.....good write


    • DarkTears
      September 29, 2008
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      um

      Thanks for the comment and glad u have that impression...


  • luna-midnight gold member
    September 28, 2008

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    aww, this is very emotional...and sad.....
    thanks for entering, and good luck
    Stephanie ♥