Through the eyes of the true

I see you mommy,
Glaring at me.
With such love and such truth;
Thank you for setting me free!
Bringing me into a happy home,
Where I can run and bark and sometimes pee
And I know you're never mad at me.

Honestly, I mean hey how could you be?
I love you as you do me, and daddy too!
I want you to see into my eyes,
As I bark and yelp with joy.
I hope you see I need you momma,
I need this love this home this freedom.

All of which you give to me,
My happy little home
With my loving family,
And me

Author notes

Through the eyes of your doggy
I love puppies

A contest entry

Write on My Picture by Flowergirl. 750 points, ended September 29, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Flowergirl
September 28, 2008
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wow that is very amazing i loved it thank you for your kind poem it is very sweet....
Granny Goose
September 28, 2008

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Ahhh.. this is a sweet poem And I wish you best of luck in the contest

Dee