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Whispers in the moonlight

Whispers in the moonlight drifting solitary free
Where the night warms the darkness they will never be
The tide mutters lust on the shore no one hears
Feeds on the debris of those unknown fears

I see the stars falling like feathers from the skies
Raindrops crawling in the corner of her eyes
I hear the wind whispers a reflection on her face
Longing for the freedom that they may feel her grace

Mysteriously the moonlight dance on her pallid silhouette
A beam find her, caresses her tresses, as she lies, wet
Passing fleetingly, the light echoes in her soul
Stills her longing consumes the whole

Sometimes alone at night she hears the whistle blow
The time has come to linger in the valley below
In the dulcet moonlight angels dance from above
Take her on their wings to where they make love

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Prompt: Take Me By Moonlight (Picture)

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 2, 2008

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    Ah..eternity..eternity..and the eternity is dancing through the words of the wonderful and mesmerized poetry of the poet..what a wonderful poetry you did here well done..and thanks for this work...

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    September 29, 2008
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    Thank you for your most beautifully sensual entry, good luck in my contest, Josie