I am a mother of three.
I am a wife to be.
I am lonely at times.
I ease myself with writing rhymes.
I've been down a hard road,
but I have fought my way back.
I have attempted suicide,
but I am done with all that.
Sometimes I cry when alone,
wishing for him to come home.
Then when he walks in the door,
I don't miss him no more.
I am out going and funny.
I love making money.
I love meeting new faces.
I love going new places.
I walk around with a smile,
trying to hide the denile.
I've come to terms with who I am.
I have a good man.
I'm moving on with my life.
I'm trying to be strong.
I'm still trying to figure out,
where i belong.
A contest entry
- DESCRIBE YOURSELF IN Rhyme (spiritual poem) by Pisces rainbow.
1000 points, ended October 7, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn that silver into Gold pt 9 by whispernthedark.
400 points, ended October 18, 2008, 39 entries
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Comments
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I really love the acceptance you have grown to have. Wonderful write, and I am also the mother of three
Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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Beautifully Stated!
You caught me in your flood of expression and drew me along. Your phrasing is natural, but compelling, an emotional song! I liked it a lot!!!!
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This is beautiful,
I walk around with a smile
I love that line,
finding the positive and always focus on it.
it seems you already have everything you need, you just have to see it. when I looked at the good in my life I was amazed, I had spent so much time focusing on all the garbage so now I toss it out and now when I smile I feel it.
I DO LOVE THIS MY FRIEND
wonderful rhyme
and a beautiful soul
God bless and thank you for such a lovely entry
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what an excellent piece of work.
you describe yourself as a human being without airs.
how nice
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