In a world where order reigns, it's easy to overlook the infinite beauty of imperfection.
Where rows of crops and clusters of mini mansions stand, separated by grids of concrete and asphalt, it's hard to find a trace of what used to be. Or to imagine what could or would be if just one link of the event chain had failed.
Common sense used to dictate behavior; now rules and laws govern (or feebly attempt to control) actions and reactions to a point where instincts are belittled and obliterated.
Invisible links form a superficial unity, while nameless fears and paranoid privacy divide.
No closer to understanding; now ignorance has a louder voice.
Our superiority complex is destroying what remains of paradise.
Is forgiveness still an option?
Critiques welcomed
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The need to have more, and feel that you are better than your neighbor is as old as humanity. Religion is now controlled by doctrine and dogma rather than an attempt to teach peace and love. Man, it seems, has an inborn need to dominate and control his surroundings.
This, as well as many other things has led the way. Forgiving is considered a weakness.
excellent write.
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I feel that it is far better to forgive the self then others because people seem to make the same mistakes over and over again including ourselves great read
love the rev papa
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Very profound!
Beautifully written piece of prose, which leave a lot for the readers to think about. Man treads with heavy feet on this beautiful land. We do so much damage with our arrogance and ignorance. Well done! -
Well thought through.
Your thoughts portrayed the behaviour that destroys us in this modern society very well. Forgiveness - or rather not to forgive - is just part of the problem. So, yes, forgiveness is ALWAYS an option.
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Well done!! You did an excellent job writing and portraying this!! I love the way you think and write!!! I can tell that you wrote this from your heart!! You did a beautiful job!! Yes forgiveness is still an option!!! I LOVE IT!!
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Very true
good write
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WOW great insight into life. Not only are you thinking outside of the box you are jumping right out! Awsome I reallyenjoyed it!
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