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Overcome!

Missing image
This thorny rosebush-like world
reminds of a shadow side
that’s never far away.

The quest for happiness and love
can be like the pursuit of a
mirage in an arid desert.

Overcome!
Hear your truth’s insistent pleas.
Trust your own intuitive heart.

Relish in the infinite
and unfold your soul’s sails.
Spread your angelic wings,
and soar high on nature’s wind.
Love will find you.

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  • Judith Chandler
    December 9, 2008

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    An inspirational write, expressed in an original way with unusual imagery.

    Thank you for entering my contest.


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    it's beautiful


  • Beret55 silver member
    November 11, 2008
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    This is very good. a deep write.


  • Janice M Pickett
    November 2, 2008

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    Beautiful words from a beautiful lady. This should get a trophy.


  • WolfHeart
    October 8, 2008

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    Uplifting and gives the reader a sense of purpose...determination.
    The quest for happiness and love
    can be like the pursuit of a
    mirage in an arid desert.

    This is my favorite part - touched me in some way.
    Nice writing!


  • condor gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    What a fantastic poem. Your words were absolutely wonderful. I loved the way you put this all together. showing someone how to spread their wings and go forward, you certainly did that. I also love the picture that goes with it. Very inspiring poem with beautiful words. I especially love the second verse.


    • Nicada silver member
      October 6, 2008
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      Thanks my friend for your continued support. It means a lot to me. Blessings, Patty


  • spideracer gold member
    September 29, 2008
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    Yes all can be overcome when the desire is there, A well written poem that comes from the heart.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    September 28, 2008

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    very

    sweet thoughts, and seems like you penned this knowing a thing or two about the subject!


    • Nicada silver member
      September 28, 2008
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      Thanks and yes I have had a few years of experience with it. lol I appreciate your comments. Patty


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    September 28, 2008

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    this is truly inspirational,
    a true blessing, and this is always in my prayers that everyone can overcome!
    love creates freedom of the mind
    lovely my kindhearted friend...
    God bless you always


    • Nicada silver member
      September 28, 2008
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      Thanks much dear friend. Your heartfelt comments mean a lot to me. Blessinsg, Patty

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