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Complaints for Nature

Why does the sky cry?
It's tears are so big
they always make me wet.

Why does the sun shine?
It's rays are so warm,
they make me burn.

Why does the wind blow?
It blows so hard
it sometimes makes me fly away.

Why is the sky blue?
Blue is not my color,
and I want it to change.

Why is Earth so populated?
It's really congested,
I want some people to move to other planets.

Why are the stars so far?
I want to touch one,
to hold it in my hands.

Why is everything the way it is?
Why can't we have some renovation
of the universe once in a while?

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  • Kathraina silver member
    January 3

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    Unique write, I love the idea of Nature's plea. Bravo!! Great job, and good luck in the contest

    ♥ Kathraina

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    I love this it is a very nice piece indeed you have loads of talent keep a hold of this best wishes always


  • foreverair
    October 11, 2008

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    wow... this is amazing. i love the whole idea, and how you put everything together is wonderful. great write!