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midnight journey

walking home at night
the wet street shines golden
reflecting streetlights

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#6

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  • HpWICKEDangel
    September 28, 2008
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    short but sweet. on a night that is raining, it takes me to the city.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    September 28, 2008
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    this is a nice haiku, really enjoyable, and paints a lovely image. thanks for entering and good luck
    Stephanie ♥